Sunset
Night is falling________________
dusk is dawning______________
and the setting Sun___________
__________throws its__________
_______________flames________
____________________to the sky
with the glorious appeal______
of God’s majesty,_____________
it is__________________________
__________a prism____________
_______________of____________
_________________dazzling fire
____and then_________________
__________it grows____________
________________deeper_______
_____________________darker__
__________________________until
the glowing red embers_______
_________________give way to the stars.
dusk is dawning______________
and the setting Sun___________
__________throws its__________
_______________flames________
____________________to the sky
with the glorious appeal______
of God’s majesty,_____________
it is__________________________
__________a prism____________
_______________of____________
_________________dazzling fire
____and then_________________
__________it grows____________
________________deeper_______
_____________________darker__
__________________________until
the glowing red embers_______
_________________give way to the stars.
posted by Rachel @ 4:59 PM
21 Comments:
At 8/20/2005 5:10 PM,
Rachel said…
Gosh... sorry about all the lines, but that was the only way I could get it to show up in the format that it's supposed to be in.
At 8/20/2005 5:18 PM,
Anonymous said…
That's pretty!
At 8/20/2005 5:36 PM,
Rachel said…
Heh... thanks. It just sort of came randomly while I was watching a sunset.
I would like to point out that this is from age 13... but it is the one that won the context (for reasons I still don't quite understand) so there ya go.
At 8/20/2005 5:46 PM,
Herohtar said…
Coolness, I like it. It would be better without the lines though. ;-)
At 8/20/2005 7:03 PM,
Anonymous said…
It's great.
At 8/20/2005 11:02 PM,
Anonymous said…
Hey, that's the kind of thing that gives composers something to do. I can really hear the music that goes with it. I also like that you did something real. A lot of poetry today is based on the King's New Clothes principal. This, though- this is a sunset. Reminds me of Pascal a bit.
Very good. You have something there.
At 8/20/2005 11:38 PM,
Anonymous said…
Lol. It's EMPORER'S New Clothes.
At 8/20/2005 11:44 PM,
Anonymous said…
Not in my world.
At 8/21/2005 8:17 AM,
Anonymous said…
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At 8/21/2005 12:37 PM,
Anonymous said…
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At 8/21/2005 1:06 PM,
Anonymous said…
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At 8/21/2005 7:30 PM,
Herohtar said…
Oohh... Rachel pwned some comments, lol.
At 8/21/2005 8:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
I've been wondering, where'd "pwned" come from?
At 8/21/2005 8:37 PM,
Herohtar said…
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pwned
At 8/21/2005 8:37 PM,
Anonymous said…
Power owned.
At 8/21/2005 8:42 PM,
Anonymous said…
Oh. Cool site. My theory is on there.
At 8/21/2005 9:28 PM,
Herohtar said…
Your theory?
At 8/21/2005 10:16 PM,
Anonymous said…
^
That's always what I assumed when I fist heard it 4 years ago. People started saying "power owned" on StarCraft and CounterStrike. Then a couple months later or so it seemed to be shortened to "pwned." But everyone has their theories. Actualy, only the very most nerdy really develoup theories for this sort of thing. Anyway, they mention "Power owned" on the site you gave.
At 8/22/2005 12:04 AM,
Herohtar said…
Ah, well my theory was that it was just a typo of "owned".
At 8/22/2005 12:55 PM,
Anonymous said…
That's what I was thinking, too. But then it got used so much I figured it was on purpose.
At 8/22/2005 1:49 PM,
Herohtar said…
Yeah, it's on purpose most of the time now, unless someone is really trying to type owned and hit the 'p' instead of the 'o'
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